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Baroque's Big write!

Baroque's budding authors.

In the last couple of weeks, Baroque class have been creating stories around the theme of 'The Lost World'. They have been using the skills that they have been learning in their literacy sessions to write the beginning of an amazing story.

Here are just a few extracts from these super stories!

'Where am I? Why? I would  not cross the bridge just in case it snaps then I might fall into the scary deep.'    Rio

'After four months of fighting blood-curdling predators and even prey, I found the lost world. A bridge looked as if it might break. The water had mythical creatures in it.'   Cory

'I see a bridge. I step on it. It is wobbly, as I step I crack some wood........crocodiles are snapping at my ankles.'   Lily

'As I was approaching the bridge, it started creaking. I stepped on it carefully. The piece of wood fell off. I looked down and I panicked. My heart was beating like a Tiger running.' Alisha

I think you will agree - some super story starts.........watch this space for more from The Lost World!